TheDefinitionOfGay's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Magic Jizz ep 2 Wardog]

Holy shit man you don't need to do that smoothing effect on every single keyframe. Also, your characters look very stiff and lifeless, you should aim to make your characters more living and smooth when you draw them.
I really do like like your sense of humour and I think there is a lot of potential for your work to be really hilarious, but before that you need to get the technical stuff down. Your characters' faces and heads are very static in every scene, so you should try animating them more. I know this takes up more time, but if you want better quality then you have to do it.
Another import thing you overlook is your lines. They are really wobbly and their sizes are random. Try to draw more defined lines with even thickness'.
One last thing, your voice acting is really choppy. When you edit it together leave a bit of space between audio clips or overlap them. The quality of your voice acting itself should naturally improve if you actively try to sound more animated in your speech.
I hope you push yourself to improve as an animator and don't just leave something if you don't think it looks good.

wardog810 responds:

most of the stuff i do is because i am lazy but i am making an effort to improve now

[The Legend of Minecraft]

Pretty nicely done, but through the first half of the movie you overused gradients. They should really only be used in colour for subtle effects. Also, taking more time to actually animate things instead of tweening them (like when link held his sword and shield and jogged on the spot) would really make your cartoons a lot better.

LuisFregoso responds:

tx for your opinion :D, I'll try to improve those aspects :)

[Pokemon Satire Version]

Ironically, the "because it's never been done before" line has been done so many times. I cringe now whenever I hear it.

Blordow responds:

IRONICALLY THATS THE WHOLE POINT, ITS ALL BEEN FUCKING DONE BEFORE, EVEN THE LINE ITSELF

[Antumbra]

This is some pretty amazing work, how long did it take to finish?

Pyrowman responds:

Too long, haha! I don't know exactly, about 5 months? Should have been 3 or even 2 and a half. Stuff happened.

[Stickman Can't Fight 6-2]

It was really good but the voice acting was pretty bad and you shouldn't use gradients for shading (like on the gun).

guitan11 responds:

note taken

[''War'']

The animation was pretty solid but you should have taken the time to colour it.

janfon1 responds:

My crap doesn't need a colour.